In today's lesson, I received feedback from my focus group on whether I should write my article in first or third person. After having looked at other TV listings magazines and asking my focus group, I have decided to change my article from first person to third person, giving the reader more information about the documentary itself. Here is my original, first person article but I am going to work on changing this to fit the typical conventions of a TV magazine. I have also carried on working on my TV listings layout which has changed dramatically.
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